There was a snowstorm in
Ontario for 10 horrible days. There was
no school or work. Everything was closed
due to the 8 inches of snow outside and you were not allowed to go outside. People were starting to get bored due to the
power outage. Some people were even
starting running out of food. But there
was one girl who stayed positive through this whole situation. Here name was Emily. One night Emily wished that the snow would just
melt. 2 days later. As the
weather changed, they all ran
out to enjoy the sunshine.
Instead of Here name was Emily you should say Her name was Emily.
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