Today was the day I was going to search for
treasure with a map I found at the beach. The first clue was at the back of the
treasure map. It said, ‘I am a place where people like to have picnics at.’ The
first thing that came to my mind was the park, I quickly went to the park and
found the next clue. This went on till I was at the last clue. I looked in front and behind. Which way.
I decided to go in front. I kept walking then all of a sudden I crashed into something. It was the treasure.
i really liked your story but when you wrote ' i was walking in front' i think it would make more sense if you wrote ' i kept walking until i crashed into something'
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