The Pot
It was the grand opening of a new park,
everyone was going. I decided it was better to go in the evening. When I got to
the park I was the only one there. I heard singing, I turned around and started
to follow the singing. I crouched down and started to examine where the singing
was coming from. The singing came from a bunch of people around a pot. The pot
was brown, had detail on it, and had legs sticking out of it. I was about to
run when someone grabbed me and everything turned black.
Great story!The only thing I would suggest is when you wrote "The pot was brown, with red detail on it" you should have said The pot was brown, and had detail on it.
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