Wednesday 23 November 2016




                                          The Pot

         It was the grand opening of a new park, everyone was going. I decided it was better to go in the evening. When I got to the park I was the only one there. I heard singing, I turned around and started to follow the singing. I crouched down and started to examine where the singing was coming from. The singing came from a bunch of people around a pot. The pot was brown, had detail on it, and had legs sticking out of it. I was about to run when someone grabbed me and everything turned black.

1 comment:

  1. Great story!The only thing I would suggest is when you wrote "The pot was brown, with red detail on it" you should have said The pot was brown, and had detail on it.

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